Heh, very nice. You designed a really interesting vampire character. His hair's awesome and you did well with his duds. Clean sketch lineart too.

Keep up the great work, as always.

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Wow this is really good! Your line art is so clean and crisp.

Ha, but if you want him to look a little less "girly", try to make the curve on his chest just a tad bit more squarish , but tone it down some. It'll make him look a tad bit more built.

Also, if you add a bit of line from the ear to help distinguish the jaw line, it may help the flow of the face.

Then if the shoulder on his right were a tad bit higher , it would really help the drawing feel a slight more real.

Sorry if I seem a tad bit nitpicky, but it says you wanted critique. It would be there if I had a sub, but I don't. Dang dA being biased. But I do hope you improve, cause his design seems kick butt and little things can really make a pic like this.

If you can make sense of this, you are also godly smart.

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I love your style my friend^^

Yea, I noticed pretty much all of that stuff too. X3; I also realized that the strap on his right shoulder (but facing him on the left) isn't positioned right... Makes me frusterated... >_>;

But, thanks for all of the tips! :3 It's very much appreciated! ;3

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It's okay if he looks girly I always confuse their gender no madder how they tell me to look at it!XD
But this looks really good I cant draw anime at all.

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Wow, this is really good :33
The facial is the best-- it definitely tells it's a guy

If you want to get better, i think this will help alittle:

I agree with Xeqz (or tatl XD) with the body shape, abit too round on his chest. make it more flat and bulk and put more of the chest (where the shirt opens), so it shows some muscle lol X3 (man chest)

make the shoulders broader. the shoulders are supposed to be two heads wide--

and also add more volume to his hair-- it looks kinda thin and makes the top of his head flatter than normal

Hope I helped :3 *wink wink* and good luck with the story

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whoa...i envy you..T-T

the body is great and the clothing...you did a wonderful job..

the creast on the elbow part and the back..i cant do that..huhu..im still practicing...good work on everything..

the hair style and the eyes are my favorite..~^_^~

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